Thank you Gnome.
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Space
Do you really care?
About what's out there?
I plea,
Our problems are here,
So keep them all near,
You see?
Don't spread them around,
Keep them on the ground,
With me.
This is a Lai Verse. I wrote it a few weeks ago for school.
(Just in case you didn't get the message.) It's about the way humans travel into space when they have so many problems that need to be solved on their own planet!
I'm sure when Gnome sees it, she will have plenty to say!
3 comments:
Wow Slammy. That's a powerful poem. I feel the same way.
I'm so impressed that you've stuck with writing your book for so long. That's incredible! I can't wait to read it. That is really awesome that Gnome is able to help you. Every writer needs a good editor...painful but true. Keep at it!! : )
Slammy, I think you've surpassed me, I don't know if I can help you much anymore, but I'll try!
Love, Gnome
Slammy, I can't WAIT to read your book! And little E will be so excited to read it as well . . .who knows, if it takes you a long time, she'll be the perfect age to read it once it's done.
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